by Iain Purdon » 31 Jan 2019, 16:21
Hi Ove
I like the pause at the start as you wait for the melody. Nicely judged.
If you are able to do it again, there's a couple of things I suggest. In the first verse when you go from C to Am, there is an F chord for a moment on the accompanying guitar, followed quickly by Am. I think Am from the off would be better, as happens later in the tune when the phrase comes up again. Also, to my ears, the chorus bit needs somehow to stand out more as a climax. I feel the lead guitar could be a bit louder against the backing all the way through but particularly in the chorus! It's almost asking to be double tracked there, or for a change of lead guitar tone. Something, not sure what.
Others may think differently and it's certainly a great song to render as an intro.
Hope you don't mind my thoughts.
All the best! Iain
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