Tolo - 'Father to Son'

[tolo]

Evening all,

Please find my latest original composition 'Father to Son' - and last track for my upcoming new record.

I hope you enjoy it - and of course advice always welcome....

Best,

Tony

https://app.box.com/s/4f6mxf2vrbhzjz9naworyvakawj8kahk

[ecca]

Good.
Plenty of variations of tone , feel, atmosphere . Some really fluent runs in there.
Loved it.
Usual criticism from me;
It ran too long @ 7.26.
Nice job Tony !

[fullerton62strat]

Great composition Tony - well above average. A great feel to the piece and a nice touch using Kiplings poem, which in itself is a great template for life.

Aptly named with super sounds. One of the best I've heard for some time. Credit where its due - I loved it.

John

[tolo]

Gentlemen - thanks for coming back - glad you liked the track.

Ecca - I know, I know - but the poem is over a minute (and I edited it to include pauses which were necessary). I take the criticism wholeheartedly - but it's the way it is. I don't write for brevity - but up until I think its finished. I know I need more discipline! I can't guarantee it though... Still awaiting that colab where you can limit me to 30 seconds

But then again I am guessing you are also of the great vintage that listened regularly to tracks longer than 7 mins?!!